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Mah teaser is too long. There is too much backstory. I don’t intro all my characters quick...

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Mah teaser is too long.

There is too much backstory.

I don’t intro all my characters quick enough.

But I liiiiiiike the first scene so fuckin much.
How do I kill my darling?

Thing is the part about the teaser that I like the most is the one scene that writers and non-writers(prose and TV) have all commented on. Everyone likes it.

Just like does it serve my story? Ehhhhhhh just a bit. It sets tone a bit, gives a wee glimpse. Buuuuuut does it advance plot n shizzle? Ehhhh.

Sooooo what to dooooooo.


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