Mah teaser is too long.
There is too much backstory.
I don’t intro all my characters quick enough.
But I liiiiiiike the first scene so fuckin much.
How do I kill my darling?
Thing is the part about the teaser that I like the most is the one scene that writers and non-writers(prose and TV) have all commented on. Everyone likes it.
Just like does it serve my story? Ehhhhhhh just a bit. It sets tone a bit, gives a wee glimpse. Buuuuuut does it advance plot n shizzle? Ehhhh.
Sooooo what to dooooooo.
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Mah teaser is too long. There is too much backstory. I don’t intro all my characters quick...
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