The fic I am reading is so bad that I want to show it to Hex. Because Hex hates the whole “Telling not showing” and the whole poorly voiced/changing voices thing.
And really this fic is so bad. The writing is so bad.
“John was feeling really bad and he wasn’t sure what to do. John left his room in a hurry then returned quickly. They had been fighting and nothing could be solved with John stewing in his room and Sherlock pacing. The house was filled with an aroma of hate and angst. John wasn’t sure what he was going to say next to Sherlock. Sherlock was trying to find a way to convince John. Lestrade was busy in his office going through case work and thinking he should get away to the country more often.”
Yes…bad
BUT
Sherlock has fucked 183 men in this fic so I’m fuckin loving that fact. I love the idea of well experienced Sherlock since everyone else has decided he’s a virgin. That has kept me reading.